Hi Chris,
Very interesting!

Give it time though, in my experience this sort of intermittent harsh ride often returns after a period of time...let us know in a week or two whether the ride is still crash free.
I assume you were reading threads like this one ?
http://www.frenchcarforum.co.uk/forum/v ... =3&t=20909" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
Somewhere around 6 years ago I posted pictures of my own bodge for this problem on my previous Xantia, I thought it was in the above thread but couldn't find it so it must have been in another thread. As you know the original pipe that you cut has a slot that travels all the way down the side, rather than cutting mine short I clamped a pipe over it that captured the flow and redirected it to the surface as follows:
The idea was for the incoming oil containing unwanted bubbles to be dispersed at the surface of the oil where they could de-aerate easily rather than directing the air bubbles forcibly down into the bottom of the tank right next to the pump inlet.
Yes there are two filters between the return and the pump and the bubbles should travel (slowly!) to the surface, but it seems that if there is sufficient quantity of bubbles coming back in the return line the oil surface tension at the filter is overwhelmed allowing some air to pass through the filters and get sucked into the pump inlet line.
My bodge was relatively successful, the very intermittent harsh ride of that car mostly but not completely went away, and consistently remained improved for years afterwards, the change was big enough that I left it in the car right up until it was sold - the new owner will get a surprise when they go to change the LHM!
If your simpler mod of simply cutting the return pipe short works just as well or better I'm tempted to do it on my current Xantia... please keep us informed of how long lasting the improvement is.
Do you have the measurement of how long you cut the pipe ? And did you deliberately cut it on an angle ? I wonder what the optimal length is, given the average surface level of the oil at normal ride height... is yours above the surface of the oil or just below it ?
PS one other thought, by taking the top of the tank right off and putting it back you might have also inadvertently fixed an air leak on either the pump pickup or main return pipes where they attach at the top...